My head is swimming with blog topics this week, all around email. First I went to the StrongMail email marketing conference Monday morning, then yesterday downloaded a fantastic report from MarketingSherpa on common email newsletter mistakes. So bear with me, but there are so many topics to take on…and so many seem like they’d be no brainers but I see our copywriting clients make email mistakes all the time.

 

Heavy on my mind right now is how many times marketers forget to make use of their non marketing emails. For example, I’ show the Welcome email can be the most often read email. So after someone subscribes to your email newsletter, for example, you’d send them a welcome email. But are you using it to reinforce your voice and brand? To remind them of all the benefits they’re going to get as a subscriber? To confirm for them that they made a smart choice when they handed over their email address? Or is your welcome email (if you’re using one, and you should be) generic and dry and dull?

 

Another missed opportunity is the transactional email. For example, yesterday I posted a press release (about our upcoming talk on online press releases) at PR Web, and received just a straightforward, boring confirmation that thanks me twice and has the order details in it:

 

Dear Sharon,

 

Thank you for your recent order of $80.00 with PRWeb.

Order Summary

 

Invoice/Tracking Number: xxxxxxxxx

 

Date Paid: February 05, 2008

Payment type: Credit Card (Visa)

Paid to: PRWeb

 

Order Details:

- PRWeb Press Release - $80.00

Order Total: $80.00

 

Again, thank you for your order.

 

Sincerely,

 

PRWeb Staff

 

Excuse me, but that’s it? I just spent 80 bucks on this, and yeah, I want a receipt, but how about something more? Something like:

 

Dear Sharon,

 

Thank you for entrusting your news to one of the Internet’s most popular press release distribution sites. After the release date (noted below), be sure to keep an eye on the useful metrics so you can track how well your press release is doing. And if you have any questions, don’t hesitate to contact us at ….

 

Then give me the order details. (And can we just outlaw the word "sincerely"? There are so many other wonderful ways to sign off!)

 

That’s not so hard, is it? To be a bit human and to reinforce their marketing message?

How many emails is your company sending out that could be working for you, instead of not working at all? Or worse yet, against you…